Timothy Brandus – Mage P.I.
Last weekend, one of the guys in our group ran a Mage: The Awakening one-shot. We all had a lot of fun and decided to make it a campaign. Character creation was relatively simple. The hardest part for me was choosing just-the-right options(tm). I finally decided on a police detective who stumbled upon magic while investigating a serial killer. He awakens as he confronts the killer. Unfortunately, the killer was able to slay his last victim, but only seconds before Tim finished him off. Suddenly, the room began to glow and names appeared on the walls. At first, Tim thought they were names of victims but he soon realized they were the names of other Mages. He added his own and immediately input his resignation from the police force. Since then, he’s worked as a private investigator specializing in the occult. He lives in a house in Quincy, Massachusetts, along with three other Mages who awakened about the same time he did.
For those who have played M:TA before, I ask you look over my character and give any advice you think would help (This is the first time I’ve ever played M:TA).
Shadow Name: Timothy Brandus
Virtue: Justice
Vice: Pride
Concept: Private Investigator
Path: Arcanus
Health: 7
Willpower: 4
Gnosis: 1
Mana: 7
Wisdom: 7
Size: 5
Speed: 10
Defense: 2
Armor: 3 (when Shielding spell is cast)
Initiative Mod: 9
Attributes
Intelligence: 2
Wits: 2
Resolve: 2
Strength: 1
Dexterity: 4
Stamina: 2
Presence: 3
Manipulation: 3
Composure: 3
Skills
Computer (Hacking): 2
Investigation (Crime Scene): 5 (Rote Skill)
Occult: 3
Firearms: 1
Larceny: 1
Weaponry: 2
Empathy (Lies): 3 (Rote Skill)
Intimidation: 1
Persuasion: 2
Socialize: 1
Arcana
Fate (+): 3
Time (+): 2
Mind: 1
Forces (-)
Merits
High Speech
Eidetic Memory
Fighting Finesse (Knife)
Disarm
Fast Reflexes (2)
Rotes
The Perfect Moment (Fate 2)
Fortune’s Protection (Fate 2)
Postcognition (Time 2)
Nimbus
Time seems to slow a bit
Dedicated Magic Tool: Silver Knife
Combat: Silver Knife

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BrianD January 13th, 2009 at 12:17 PM
Like the good Professor, I haven’t had a chance to play M:tA. I’m looking forward to hearing more about this story!